tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post8612718975532431145..comments2023-10-09T08:07:45.567-04:00Comments on The Oracle and The Muse: "That's YAmore" BlogfestAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07995267172282765794noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-14839861084906647712011-02-15T20:04:20.129-05:002011-02-15T20:04:20.129-05:00"You do something to me..."
Love it!
M..."You do something to me..."<br /><br />Love it!<br /><br />Marie, http://marierearden.blogspot.comMarie Reardenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13653459061863869033noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-35906878191137186292011-02-15T09:46:50.411-05:002011-02-15T09:46:50.411-05:00Very beautiful! Great visual!Very beautiful! Great visual!Shannon Duffyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12528431298121172482noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-92020574774947882892011-02-14T08:54:39.430-05:002011-02-14T08:54:39.430-05:00Aw, I love that he was nervous about kissing her a...Aw, I love that he was nervous about kissing her and then surprised when she actually kissed him back. And there is something about the not-quite-so-romantic "Likewise" when he answers her back that makes him that much more adorable in this scene. Great job!Tracyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03726858055689145824noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-88792412843344748822011-02-13T10:51:45.428-05:002011-02-13T10:51:45.428-05:00Hey! A guy who can write love scenes! I'm impr...Hey! A guy who can write love scenes! I'm impressed.cleemckenziehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15456109243453726483noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-35099477397679480172011-02-12T14:15:18.014-05:002011-02-12T14:15:18.014-05:00I love the line "the space between us evapora...I love the line "the space between us evaporated", it's a lovely visual of them connecting without resistance and is a great continuance of the water imagery which we see more of when he is "frozen" by her. I also liked how time seemed to slow and he became hyper-aware of his actions (left hand, right hand)-- it did wonders for the tension, I could really feel his (first kiss?) apprehension.<br />- Sophia.Sophiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17926811798176739307noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-67722193990230967362011-02-12T11:13:00.555-05:002011-02-12T11:13:00.555-05:00You all make me blush!! Thank you all for commenti...You all make me blush!! Thank you all for commenting. It was fun to write that scene. *HUGS* to you all.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07995267172282765794noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-85341468976383760952011-02-12T00:49:56.180-05:002011-02-12T00:49:56.180-05:00Tight writing :) I love the focus on each step he ...Tight writing :) I love the focus on each step he took, it feels super realistic. Thanks for sharing!Jessica Silvahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15405267450788581689noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-54878875806051048872011-02-11T19:55:37.269-05:002011-02-11T19:55:37.269-05:00Very pretty scene! Love the way their lips graze ...Very pretty scene! Love the way their lips graze a few times before the actual kiss. Very nice.Liz Czukashttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15656897969180818333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-82853618959501401052011-02-11T19:23:24.305-05:002011-02-11T19:23:24.305-05:00This was so SWEET! Totally loved this scene. I l...This was so SWEET! Totally loved this scene. I love first kiss scenes and this I think was the sweetest I've ever read.J.A. Soudershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17460557430817566294noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-23565573063816038162011-02-11T18:48:55.396-05:002011-02-11T18:48:55.396-05:00This is so different from anything I've read b...This is so different from anything I've read before... I really like it! Your style is very romantic, and this scene is so sweet. Great job!Katy Uppermanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07725740174190514869noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-71632407249833950242011-02-11T18:00:45.082-05:002011-02-11T18:00:45.082-05:00Adore the setting, totally lovely.Adore the setting, totally lovely.Margo Bensonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06759845391358543223noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-18374842715349670952011-02-11T17:41:24.590-05:002011-02-11T17:41:24.590-05:00Sounds magical...kissing scenes are the BEST!Sounds magical...kissing scenes are the BEST!Nicole McLaughlinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13467516937078644466noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-15321927460092488162011-02-11T17:16:40.944-05:002011-02-11T17:16:40.944-05:00Very swoon worthy, indeed! Love the setting. :)Very swoon worthy, indeed! Love the setting. :)PK HREZOhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11650153097981426833noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-32735588808582148122011-02-11T16:56:19.296-05:002011-02-11T16:56:19.296-05:00This isn't a genre I regularly read, so thanks...This isn't a genre I regularly read, so thanks for the nice introduction! Good luck with your new WIPs as well!<br />ericaerica and christyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13074820593371226159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-32023784478019823382011-02-11T16:48:50.209-05:002011-02-11T16:48:50.209-05:00"A slight jolt of energy shocked Caenus, and ..."A slight jolt of energy shocked Caenus, and held him frozen as she returned his kiss. His heart beat faster. She stole his breath."<br /><br />Very sweet!!!Jus Accardohttp://www.jusaccardo.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-45990290487387182732011-02-11T15:36:56.247-05:002011-02-11T15:36:56.247-05:00Nice tension. I especially liked 'their lips g...Nice tension. I especially liked 'their lips grazed several times before joining."Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-9670819423314629872011-02-11T14:06:57.436-05:002011-02-11T14:06:57.436-05:00Love it, the build up, anticipation, Amore'!Love it, the build up, anticipation, Amore'!LM Prestonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624508396760965680noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-11973754980810424382011-02-11T12:29:10.201-05:002011-02-11T12:29:10.201-05:00Oooh, me likey. I love the line: “You do something...Oooh, me likey. I love the line: “You do something to me, Caenus of Iolkos,” she breathed.Heather Howlandhttp://www.heatherhowland.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5268893420926527615.post-81951327026179665492011-02-11T10:41:28.730-05:002011-02-11T10:41:28.730-05:00Delectable!Delectable!KatOwens: Insect Collectorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12228171304170449979noreply@blogger.com